FacebookGoogle PlusInstagramLinkedInTwitter
Presented by State Library Victoria

Another Poem! :)

English is useless,

This homework is ruthless.

My mind is a mess,

Yet I have to do this test.

It’s hurting my brain,

It’s causing my eyes to strain.

It’s some comprehension about dancers,

I don’t know any of the answers.

These questions are bogus,

I need to refocus.

Refocus on what?

I give up on this rot.

25 comments

bookwithbane

Is it weird that I imagine this as a rap?

6th Oct, 18
jayay

Huh, now that I think about it it could be a bit of a rap...

6th Oct, 18
indiaaqua

In reply to jayay

Please. Please. Please.

4w ago
jayay

In reply to indiaaqua

I can't rap lol

4w ago
indiaaqua

In reply to jayay

Me neither, but SOMEONE MUST.

4w ago
jayay

In reply to indiaaqua

ALRIGHT EVERYONE, WHO HERE CAN RAP?!?!

4w ago
frenchie

I love this poem it's really relate able :)

12th Oct, 18
jayay

Yay!

13th Oct, 18
jackwjnr

SO RELATABLE!! Great job, it sounds amazing!

16th Oct, 18
jayay

Thanks! :D

16th Oct, 18
sylvs

I LOVE THIS!! <3

17th Oct, 18
jayay

Thanks! ^-^

17th Oct, 18
spacesoda

i think u should rename this to "story of @spacesoda's life"
but seriously, good job! this is great :)

4w ago
jayay

Lmao, me and thanks! :)

4w ago
cranger

Nice job jayay, ur poem/rap is awesome although I have to admit, English isn't too bad. For me anyway.

2w ago
jayay

(HI DANI!!!!) Yay thanks! And English isn't bad for me either, I actually quite enjoy it and I was just struggling with homework while I wrote this.

2w ago
cranger

(HI JAYME!!!!) Wow, who knew. Ah, Homework. And Kasey likes ur poem too!!!!!!

2w ago
jayay

Yay! Wait who else did you show it to?

2w ago
cranger

Jus Kasey :)

2w ago
jayay

Oh ok, that's good, I kinda started freaking out a bit lol.

2w ago
cranger

Should I show it to our English teacher????
please say yes please

2w ago
jayay

No.

2w ago
danicraneger

okay then

2w ago
belindah

that is great

1d ago
jayay

Thanks! :)

1d ago