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Another Poem! :)

English is useless,

This homework is ruthless.

My mind is a mess,

Yet I have to do this test.

It’s hurting my brain,

It’s causing my eyes to strain.

It’s some comprehension about dancers,

I don’t know any of the answers.

These questions are bogus,

I need to refocus.

Refocus on what?

I give up on this rot.

29 comments

bookwithbane

Is it weird that I imagine this as a rap?

6th Oct, 18
jayay

Huh, now that I think about it it could be a bit of a rap...

6th Oct, 18
indiaaqua

In reply to jayay

Please. Please. Please.

20th Oct, 18
jayay

In reply to indiaaqua

I can't rap lol

20th Oct, 18
indiaaqua

In reply to jayay

Me neither, but SOMEONE MUST.

20th Oct, 18
jayay

In reply to indiaaqua

ALRIGHT EVERYONE, WHO HERE CAN RAP?!?!

20th Oct, 18
frenchie

I love this poem it's really relate able :)

12th Oct, 18
jayay

Yay!

13th Oct, 18
jackwjnr

SO RELATABLE!! Great job, it sounds amazing!

16th Oct, 18
jayay

Thanks! :D

16th Oct, 18
sylvs

I LOVE THIS!! <3

17th Oct, 18
jayay

Thanks! ^-^

17th Oct, 18
spacesoda

i think u should rename this to "story of @spacesoda's life"
but seriously, good job! this is great :)

19th Oct, 18
jayay

Lmao, me and thanks! :)

19th Oct, 18
cranger

Nice job jayay, ur poem/rap is awesome although I have to admit, English isn't too bad. For me anyway.

1st Nov, 18
jayay

(HI DANI!!!!) Yay thanks! And English isn't bad for me either, I actually quite enjoy it and I was just struggling with homework while I wrote this.

1st Nov, 18
cranger

(HI JAYME!!!!) Wow, who knew. Ah, Homework. And Kasey likes ur poem too!!!!!!

1st Nov, 18
jayay

Yay! Wait who else did you show it to?

1st Nov, 18
cranger

Jus Kasey :)

1st Nov, 18
jayay

Oh ok, that's good, I kinda started freaking out a bit lol.

1st Nov, 18
cranger

Should I show it to our English teacher????
please say yes please

1st Nov, 18
jayay

No.

1st Nov, 18
danicraneger

okay then

2nd Nov, 18
belindah

that is great

17th Nov, 18
jayay

Thanks! :)

17th Nov, 18
lozza

You're a bit rude!! You sound like my brother!! :)

4th Dec, 18
jayay

Ummm sorry but how exactly am I rude...?

4th Dec, 18
lozza

Aha! Now I see what you mean now I've read all the other posts. I am really good at poetry. I was shortlisted for last year's literary award at my school. Sadly though, I didn't win. :(

4th Dec, 18
jayay

Sorry but I'm confused, I've never spoken to you before or seen any of your poems so how do you 'see what I mean'?

4th Dec, 18